Friday, June 6, 2008

blog 2: leads

One well written lead is in an article talking about people using mass transit in order to avoid the high gas prices. It starts by describing the transit stations are packed with people, then it goes into it's point about gas prices pushing more people to stop driving as much. It's more or a narrative lead. 

There is another lead that isn't very good. The entire first paragraph is just one sentence, and there's a quote without actually quoting anyone. Also it's kind of boring.

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